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Sold a Story!
By Erin Thomas | August 14, 2008
I’m very excited that my short story, “Julia”, sold to On Spec magazine. I’m not sure when it will be out; I received the acceptance last week, so I’m guessing it will be in the next issue.
I’ve written a few incarnations of this story about a mother who is forced to choose between her children. The first draft, less than 2000 words, was based on a prompt from the NYC Midnight short story contest. After that, I stretched the concept out to short novella length, to explore it better. That draft was close to 10,000 words. Too long; it felt bulky. I’m pretty happy with the current draft, at just under 6000 words.
Peter Carver, a former editor with Red Deer Press, teaches a course on writing for children through George Brown College in Toronto. He always talks about a work being “the right length for itself”–not the usual length for that genre, or the size it should be to make a picture book, but the number of words it takes to tell the story properly, without a lot of extra fluff in there. I feel like I finally got “Julia” to the right length for itself. It took a lot of trying, though.
Topics: Editing, Publication, Writing | 2 Comments »
January 26th, 2009 at 9:43 pm
Congratulations, Erin; that’s fantastic!
March 16th, 2009 at 2:29 pm
Thanks, Cheryl!
Oh, and hey, I hear you’ve got some dragon-book coming out this fall… some collaboration with two other brilliant writers.
BIG congratulations on the other book, by the way!!! I can’t wait to read it.